81 Responses to Իմ առաջին անգլերեն բանաստեղծությունը / My first poem in English

  1. Arsine says:

    Shnorhavoruuuum em aper jan ev anpayamn spasum ays sharqi sharunakutyan@.:)

  2. Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing.

  3. koco says:

    Beautiful and really, really well written!!

  4. It is wonderful! The spirit and emotion shine from it! It’s so hard to write poetry and catch images in another language, but you have succeeded well. I especially like the idea of the snow flower turning to the sun. Beautifully written. If this is the first, there should definitely be more to follow…please. :)

    • Thank You very-very much dear Sheri for Your beautiful and kind words. It is my honor to recieve such kind of comment. I am very happy that my first poem in English found such kind of feedback from my foreign readers too. Thank You so much! I am deeply touched. I’ll try to continue writing new poems in English. I’ll do my best. These kind of comments inspire me as a writer.
      Arlen

  5. Lucy says:

    It is really wonderful…. It can be written only by one in love!

  6. Absolutely beautiful…

  7. Arlen, your poem is lovely and written with so much emotion. It’s a beautiful work of art! We feel how deeply you feel, it’s amazing!

  8. mistylayne says:

    A very lovely, sweet poem. :) And I love the picture!

    • Thank You very much!! Nice to recieve this comment. The picture exactly symbolizes the poem as there is the nature, the skya and, of course, the beautiful and tender girl, who is the source of inspiration for a man. Thanks again, appreciated!

  9. boomiebol says:

    Thanks so much for stopping by my blog

  10. Paula says:

    It sounds very inspired :) Congratulations on your English verses Arlen!

  11. Dina says:

    Well, isn’ that great. Well done, Arlen!
    Kepp up the good work.

    Have a lovely weekend

    Dina

  12. P. K. Newby says:

    Thanks so much for your visit to The Nutrition Doctor is In the Kitchen, Arlen. I really appreciate it. Enjoy the writing…. I love Thailand! :) Cheers, PKN

  13. paulaacton says:

    Beautiful and eloquent and if you had not said it was your first attempt in English no one would have know, thankyou for visiting my blog and I look forward to popping back to keep an eye on yours

    • Thanks much Paula for your kind feedback. I deeply appreciate your comment. I have the honor to recieve such kind of words: “if you had not said it was your first attempt in English no one would have know”. It is honor for me as it was really my first attempt.
      Thank you again.
      Wish you the best in yur future endeavours. I follow your blog with interest.

      Best regards, Arlen

  14. pennycoho says:

    What a lovely way you have with words Arlen. A natural poetress! I will enjoy following you, Blessings to you,Penny

    • Thank you Penny. It is my pleasure that you follow my blog. To be honest I did not understand properly what means “a natural poetress”. I have not meet the word “poetress” yet.
      Anyway, thanks much for your kind feedback.

      Best regards, Arlen

  15. John says:

    Thanks for visiting my website. :)

  16. I am quite impressed with your first poem in English! I look forward to reading more! Gracias, Lisa/Z

    • Thanks much Lisa for your kind feedback. I would like to say that it was my pleasure to discover your blog with your amazing zebra line paintings. Now I follow your blog with pleasure. Thanks much again! appreciated!

      • Thank you as well! I have been a guest of the museum where the images are being shown, and I have very little online time. When I am back home and in my normal (never normal) life, I look forward to more time on your blog! Thanks, Z

      • You are welcome! And thank you again! Wish you the best in your future endeavors!! It was nice to meet you here and to find your colourful blog!

  17. Anarya Andir says:

    Beautiful, and such a well written poem Arlen! You have a gift of writing! Definitely doesn’t sound like it was the first one you wrote in English. Keep it up!

  18. mz jenny lee says:

    Lovely poem—I look forward to reading your other English ones. Also, thank you for visiting my blog!

  19. Now that is expandeding your horizon. Writing poetry in a second language.
    This is a good start. And thanks for your likes.

  20. fgassette says:

    Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.

    BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!

  21. ljclayton says:

    A touching poem. how brilliant of you to write so well in a foreign language.

  22. Wow. Thank you so much for sharing this. It elevates and soothes and inspires.

  23. You did a great job on your poem. English is a difficult language to master even for writers who speak and write English. Thank you for the like on my blog. And you might be interested in this post I wrote about “my” wacky language: http://tracycampbellwriter.wordpress.com/2012/04/28/do-you-think-english-is-a-wacky-language/

    • Thank You Tracy for Your comment. I agree 100% with ou that English is a difficult language. I tried to do my best. I hope I’ll write soon new poems in English. I hope to succeed.
      I am very glad, that You liked the poem. Thanks much for the interesting post link too.
      Tracy, I deeply appreciate Your kind and friendly words. Your works are amazing and colourful. I started to follow Your blog with pleasure.

      Best regards, Arlen

  24. Thanks, Arlen again for reading more of my blog and leaving so many likes. Don’t be afraid to leave comments. I love those too. If you ever are looking for an editor to help critique your work let me know and I’ll pass along the information.

  25. You’re welcome. My mentor and editor is Marcy Kennedy. You can view her portfolio at http://www.marcykennedy.com. And thank for stopping by Karen Lee’s site too.

  26. Anytime. Did you paint the illustrations for your ladybug book? They are beautiful!

  27. Your poem is absolutely wonderful! Fabulous way to describe the most beautiful feeling in the world: love! This verse is an ode to the most special feeling: ,,Like helping lighthouse when storming the seas
    Like tremor of excitement coming from knees.
    And even if I were a flower of snow
    I’ll turn to the sun with the love of Your soul.”
    It’s absolutely lovely, the whole poem is beautiful but this part it’s my favorite, congratulations!

    With appreciation, Cristina

  28. ManeKent says:

    Beautiful poem, a true ode to love.
    Warm regards. Manekent

  29. Are u sure this is your first english poem???
    You must be kidding us!!!
    This poem is absolutely beautiful and very meaningful. You have used subtle and sweet imagery…”flower of snow”….”peacemaker dove”….WOW!!!

    • Thank You. I did not really think, did not expect, that People would like my eEnglish poems so much though I knew, that I create in English in kind of a Medieval style. I hope people like and I’ll try to continue to create poems also in English.

      Thank You very much for Your very inspiring comment.

      Arlen

  30. Your poetic style is wonderfully original and energetic – and you use English in a simple yet refreshing way. Love is hard to translate, but this is really well done. Thanks also, for stopping by my blog.

    • Hi Cheryl!
      Thank you so much for your nice words. These words are one of the best appreciation and valuation of my work in English poetry. Thank you very much!
      It was my pleasure to find a person who loves elephants, animals so much. I am glad that we share this dedication to nature. I reblogged one of your posts. If you love elephant, animals it means that you are a very good person. I am sure in that.

      All the best in your future endeavours!
      Arlen

      • Thanks for reblogging my posts, Arlen. Hopefully they will find more fans in Armenia! And yes, I very much share your dedication to nature.

      • Thank you too, dear Cheryl!
        Sure your posts will find more fans, not only in Armenia, as I have many followers of “Animal Lovers Blog” in abroad too! Thank you for sharing dedication to nature!

        Arlen

  31. sakuraandme says:

    Ahhh! How romantic!……..Paula x

  32. I really like your repeating technique with: “I love my dear, I love you Sweetheart”. Lucky the lady, she, for whom this is written!

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