Սիրելի՛ բարեկամներ, վերջին 10-15 տարիների ընթացքում ես գրել եմ մի քանի հարյուր բանաստեղծություն, որոնք պատրաստվում եմ հրատարակել (կարդացեք դրանցից մի քանիսը` այցելելով «Իմ գրքերը», այնուհետև` «Սեր` անձրևի տակ»): Սակայն սա իմ առաջին բանաստեղծությունն է անգլերեն: Այն գրել եմ այսօր: Ես, իհարկե, Շեքսպիր չեմ
և սա իմ առաջին փորձն է: Այնպես որ շատ խիստ մի դատեք
Հուսով եմ բանաստեղծությունը գեղեցիկ է ստացվել և Ձեզ դուր կգա: Շնորհակալություն: Լավագույն մաղթանքներով` Առլեն:
Dear Friends, during last 10-15 years I have written several hundred poems which I’m going to publish (read some of them visiting “My Books” and then “Love under the Rain”). But this is my first poem in English. I wrote it today. Well, I’m not Shakespeare of course
and this is my firts attempt. So do not judge very strictly
I hope the poem turned out nice I You’ll like it. Thank You. Best regards, Arlen.
“I LOVE YOU”
I love You my dear, I love You sweetheart,
About my feelings I’m roaring from heart
I didn’t imagine that life is so real
Untill I discovered without a fear,
That even through loneliness and even through pain
Your touching emotions can help me to gain
The happiest state of being in love
And that is the moment when I am above,
Above from the world with its traffic and smoke
And far from the grayish origin of fog,
Trying to reach Your delightful and wild
And always so tender and hopefulness light.
I love You my dear, I love You sweetheart
I’ll try to succeed with the love of Your heart
The world is so colourful, so boundless it is
When somebody loves you, when somebody is
Like helping lighthouse when storming the seas
Like tremor of excitement coming from knees.
And even if I were a flower of snow
I’ll turn to the sun with the love of Your soul.
I love You my sweetheart, I love You my dear
When being inspired with words of Shakespeare,
When somebody heartens with very much love
And brings peace to all like a peacemaker dove.
I love You my dear, I love You sweatheart
And I am so happy when feeling your heart
When feeling your breath which takes me so high
Becoming so brave for touching the sky.
I thank you my dear, I thank you, believe
For all these emotions that help me to live,
For the colourful world – a wonderful place,
For your life-giving love that brightens my face.
© Arlen Shahverdyan, 04.07.2012
Բանաստեղծությունը պաշտպանված է հեղինակային իրավունքով, 2012
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Shnorhavoruuuum em aper jan ev anpayamn spasum ays sharqi sharunakutyan@.:)
Շատ ապրես ցավդ տանեմ, մերսի անուշ քոմենթիդ համար:
This is beautiful, Arlen – congratulations and thank you for sharing it. Emma.
Thank you Emma for your kind comment! I deeply appreciate it! I am very glad that you liked it!
Absolutely beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
Thanks much Gina. I deeply appreciate Your kind comment.
Arlen
Beautiful and really, really well written!!
Really?
Well Thank You very much! Deeply appreciated!!
I hope people will like it, it is my first attempt
It is wonderful! The spirit and emotion shine from it! It’s so hard to write poetry and catch images in another language, but you have succeeded well. I especially like the idea of the snow flower turning to the sun. Beautifully written. If this is the first, there should definitely be more to follow…please.
Thank You very-very much dear Sheri for Your beautiful and kind words. It is my honor to recieve such kind of comment. I am very happy that my first poem in English found such kind of feedback from my foreign readers too. Thank You so much! I am deeply touched. I’ll try to continue writing new poems in English. I’ll do my best. These kind of comments inspire me as a writer.
Arlen
It is really wonderful…. It can be written only by one in love!
Yes, you are right. Wish you the same.
Thanks for your kind comment.
Best regards, Arlen
Absolutely beautiful…
Thank You very much… I am so touched.
Arlen, your poem is lovely and written with so much emotion. It’s a beautiful work of art! We feel how deeply you feel, it’s amazing!
I have the honor to receive such kind of words from You. I am very glad that You liked the poem. Thanks much for Your kind and inspiring comment. Very much appreciated. I follow Your blog with pleasure.
The feelings are all mutual Arlen
Thank you! Shnorhakal em XO
Es el em shnorhakal
A very lovely, sweet poem.
And I love the picture!
Thank You very much!! Nice to recieve this comment. The picture exactly symbolizes the poem as there is the nature, the skya and, of course, the beautiful and tender girl, who is the source of inspiration for a man. Thanks again, appreciated!
Beautiful
Thanks much! appreciated!
Thanks so much for stopping by my blog
Your welcome! It was my pleasure to visit your interesting blog!
It sounds very inspired
Congratulations on your English verses Arlen!
Thank you very much, Paula. I deeply appreciate your comment. Thanks!
Well, isn’ that great. Well done, Arlen!
Kepp up the good work.
Have a lovely weekend
Dina
Thank You Dina very much!!! I am so glad that You liked it! Thanks! Appreciated!!
Thanks so much for your visit to The Nutrition Doctor is In the Kitchen, Arlen. I really appreciate it. Enjoy the writing…. I love Thailand!
Cheers, PKN
You are always welcome!
You have a nice blog and I have the pleasure to visit it. I started to follow it. Wish you the best in your future endeavours.
Arlen
Beautiful and eloquent and if you had not said it was your first attempt in English no one would have know, thankyou for visiting my blog and I look forward to popping back to keep an eye on yours
Thanks much Paula for your kind feedback. I deeply appreciate your comment. I have the honor to recieve such kind of words: “if you had not said it was your first attempt in English no one would have know”. It is honor for me as it was really my first attempt.
Thank you again.
Wish you the best in yur future endeavours. I follow your blog with interest.
Best regards, Arlen
What a lovely way you have with words Arlen. A natural poetress! I will enjoy following you, Blessings to you,Penny
Thank you Penny. It is my pleasure that you follow my blog. To be honest I did not understand properly what means “a natural poetress”. I have not meet the word “poetress” yet.
Anyway, thanks much for your kind feedback.
Best regards, Arlen
Thanks for visiting my website.
Thank you for your kind feedback! It was my pleasure to discover your blog
Wish you the best in your future endeavours.
Best regards, Arlen
I am quite impressed with your first poem in English! I look forward to reading more! Gracias, Lisa/Z
Thanks much Lisa for your kind feedback. I would like to say that it was my pleasure to discover your blog with your amazing zebra line paintings. Now I follow your blog with pleasure. Thanks much again! appreciated!
Thank you as well! I have been a guest of the museum where the images are being shown, and I have very little online time. When I am back home and in my normal (never normal) life, I look forward to more time on your blog! Thanks, Z
You are welcome! And thank you again! Wish you the best in your future endeavors!! It was nice to meet you here and to find your colourful blog!
Beautiful, and such a well written poem Arlen! You have a gift of writing! Definitely doesn’t sound like it was the first one you wrote in English. Keep it up!
You really think so? Thank you so much! I really deeply appreciate!
Thank you very very much!!
Yes I definitely think so
. Have you written any other poems in English?
You can find them in “My Poems in English” cathegory. They are 3!
Thank you
. I’ll read them all.
Lovely poem—I look forward to reading your other English ones. Also, thank you for visiting my blog!
Thank you very much! It was my pleasure to visit your blog, it was nice.
Now that is expandeding your horizon. Writing poetry in a second language.
This is a good start. And thanks for your likes.
Thank you very much. It is my honor to receive such kind of comment. Appreciated.
I got a pleasure to visit your nice blog.
Best regards, Arlen
Beautiful poem, thanks for sharing.
BE ENCOURAGED! BE BLESSED!
Thank you!!! Much appreciated!!!
A touching poem. how brilliant of you to write so well in a foreign language.
It was my firts attempt and I am very happy that people liked it.
Thanks so much for your kind and great comment. I have the honor to receive it.
Arlen.
Wow. Thank you so much for sharing this. It elevates and soothes and inspires.
Thank you too for your kind and inspiring words. Happy to receive them from You.
Arlen
You did a great job on your poem. English is a difficult language to master even for writers who speak and write English. Thank you for the like on my blog. And you might be interested in this post I wrote about “my” wacky language: http://tracycampbellwriter.wordpress.com/2012/04/28/do-you-think-english-is-a-wacky-language/
Thank You Tracy for Your comment. I agree 100% with ou that English is a difficult language. I tried to do my best. I hope I’ll write soon new poems in English. I hope to succeed.
I am very glad, that You liked the poem. Thanks much for the interesting post link too.
Tracy, I deeply appreciate Your kind and friendly words. Your works are amazing and colourful. I started to follow Your blog with pleasure.
Best regards, Arlen
Thanks, Arlen again for reading more of my blog and leaving so many likes. Don’t be afraid to leave comments. I love those too. If you ever are looking for an editor to help critique your work let me know and I’ll pass along the information.
Thank You very much Tracy. I am touched. Much appreciated!
Arlen
You’re welcome. My mentor and editor is Marcy Kennedy. You can view her portfolio at http://www.marcykennedy.com. And thank for stopping by Karen Lee’s site too.
You are welcome. And I would like to thank you again for your friendly feedback!
Anytime. Did you paint the illustrations for your ladybug book? They are beautiful!
No, unfortunately not, I painted only the cover of the book. But I have some illustrations for children and hope to show them one day.
I look forward to seeing your illustrations for children one day.
Thank You, I’ll try to show them.
Your poem is absolutely wonderful! Fabulous way to describe the most beautiful feeling in the world: love! This verse is an ode to the most special feeling: ,,Like helping lighthouse when storming the seas
Like tremor of excitement coming from knees.
And even if I were a flower of snow
I’ll turn to the sun with the love of Your soul.”
It’s absolutely lovely, the whole poem is beautiful but this part it’s my favorite, congratulations!
With appreciation, Cristina
Cristina, I turned red!
Thank You, I am already shy. I deeply appreciate Your comments. I am glad that You have a favourite part which You mentioned. Thanks a lot!
Arlen
Beautiful poem, a true ode to love.
Warm regards. Manekent
Thank You ManeKent for Your kind feedback. I’m glad that You liked the poem.
I started to follow Your blog.
Much appreciated!
Best regards, Arlen
Are u sure this is your first english poem???
You must be kidding us!!!
This poem is absolutely beautiful and very meaningful. You have used subtle and sweet imagery…”flower of snow”….”peacemaker dove”….WOW!!!
Thank You. I did not really think, did not expect, that People would like my eEnglish poems so much though I knew, that I create in English in kind of a Medieval style. I hope people like and I’ll try to continue to create poems also in English.
Thank You very much for Your very inspiring comment.
Arlen
Your poetic style is wonderfully original and energetic – and you use English in a simple yet refreshing way. Love is hard to translate, but this is really well done. Thanks also, for stopping by my blog.
Hi Cheryl!
Thank you so much for your nice words. These words are one of the best appreciation and valuation of my work in English poetry. Thank you very much!
It was my pleasure to find a person who loves elephants, animals so much. I am glad that we share this dedication to nature. I reblogged one of your posts. If you love elephant, animals it means that you are a very good person. I am sure in that.
All the best in your future endeavours!
Arlen
Thanks for reblogging my posts, Arlen. Hopefully they will find more fans in Armenia! And yes, I very much share your dedication to nature.
Thank you too, dear Cheryl!
Sure your posts will find more fans, not only in Armenia, as I have many followers of “Animal Lovers Blog” in abroad too! Thank you for sharing dedication to nature!
Arlen
Ahhh! How romantic!……..Paula x
Thank you very much for your tender and nice attitude towards my poems. Thank you!
Arlen
I really like your repeating technique with: “I love my dear, I love you Sweetheart”. Lucky the lady, she, for whom this is written!
Yes, there is a real “She”
for whom these words are written!
Thank you again Karen. You are so kind and your comment is very nice!
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